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 Narrative: Once upon a time, long long ago, so long that nobody remembers, there was a big bang which created the universe”babbeled the geography teacher. It was so boring, I wish he was talking about universal studios in Disney land instead. My biggest dream has always been to go to Universal studios in Disney land, but I have 1 brother and 1sister, and we all live in a small cottage with our mum. Dad died when I was 4 and now I’ m 6. Mum is still trying to find a job. We are very poor, but the other day I had an amazing idea. If I could do the paper run, and baby-sit other peoples pets, and if I help around the house, I could earn enough money to go on a dream boat that would take me and my family to Disney land. Future: After 4 years of lazy work, I sprinted out of school “mum, mum guess what I have got” I shouted. ’You saw a dancing elephant?’’ “No”, I said [mum always makes those stupid comments] Look I got 4 tickets for a dream boat, heading for Disneyland. Mum stopped folding the washing “bu …bu b……..but, how did you get the money ?‘ I told her about all the work I had done in the last few years. At first she got angry at me for not telling, but then she started crying in joy. The next day we were all packed and were ready to go.